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Faded Out Picture
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Get on your knees
Beg me
Please me
It is impossible
Hold me, I cry
I want to die
Sit back and watch
I am just another
Faded out picture
Washed out and crumbling
Know how I feel
It is impossible
I faded out of this picture
You were the last to cry
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-10-05 15:20:53]
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Re: Faded Out Picture
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:03:00 PM AEST
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| great write. short and powerful. |
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Re: Faded Out Picture
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:36:51 PM AEST
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Right to the point and well worded. Awesome!
Katie |
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Re: Faded Out Picture
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:31:43 PM AEST
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A bit sad but written well.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Faded Out Picture
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:59:49 AM AEST
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whoa i like this short powerful great what a better way of saying im out of ur life
what better way of saying HELLOO DO I EXIST
great work
HeNo UnKnOwN BuTtErflY |
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