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Nothing
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:17:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I’m giving up in this world
I can’t bear to see
Bear to feel how you want me to feel
Time will pass
Leaving me with nothing
I won’t end up like everyone else
I refuse to be in a world so held up
In such little time
I will see so many people
Going further from their hearts and minds
Being left with nothing…
Just like everyone else…
They will all end up the same
It was their birth right
They just didn’t know it
And they never will…
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pyrofungus
... [
2004-10-05 15:17:51]
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Re: Nothing
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:34:34 PM AEST
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So very true.. a powerful poem you've written here.
"I refuse to be in a world so held up
In such little time" ...wow. amazing.
charlotte x_x_x
ps thanks for your comment :) |
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Re: Nothing
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by ShaBa on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:02:47 PM AEST
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Awsome ***** Bro...
Thanks for the comment on mine!
a question?
Have you herd of Existentialism. |
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Re: Nothing
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:05:36 PM AEST
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brilliant write. i loved this the truth in this and how well you have written it.
"I will see so many people
Going further from their hearts and minds
Being left with nothing…" my favorite part of this. nice insight.
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:15:18 PM AEST
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Profound and sad.
Very well done. |
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