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Within a Statue
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:03:15 PM in AEST
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He sees himself within her soul
Walking past her gracefully
Watching a structure that will never move
A form of art that caught his eye
He became connected immediately
Drawing closer to its beauty
Wanting one touch
An obsession of the eye
Cemented with color
The beauty that he saw
That he wanted all for himself
One that carried the heart of his own
Kneeling at her base
He cries
Realizing who he had become
Loosing what he had once loved
Suffering from the greed that had overpowered him
He sees his life…
His heart…
Within her eyes…
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Re: Within a Statue
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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I thought this was incredible to read.
I enjoyed the direction, flow, and great imagination you possess. |
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Re: Within a Statue
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:07:13 PM AEST
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| another excellent write. ::jealous of your talent:: =] |
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