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Trust Me
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:03:17 PM in AEST
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You're a little insecure
And a little afraid
But you never let on
Labeled a liar
It hurts you more
Than you like to show
So you pretend it doesn't phase you
Your eyes tell a different story
Let your guard down
Just for a minute
And trust me enough
To tell me what you feel
And I'll trust you enough
To have faith
In everything you say
Copyright ©
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-05 14:03:17]
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Re: Trust Me
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:21:14 PM AEST
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| awwwww....awwwwwww. |
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Re: Trust Me
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:49:47 PM AEST
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This is so so beautiful . . so sweet .. the last line was like being touched by purity.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
... Rose |
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Re: Trust Me
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:24:09 PM AEST
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| very nice. letting down your guard is one of the hardest things to do for a person. they have to be convinced that no pain will come to them, and learn to just have a foundation of trust with the person to even consider taking it down... |
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Re: Trust Me
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:20:20 PM AEST
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| Good Job! One of the best poems I have seen you write. |
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