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A Lover's Duet
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A crowded beach, two lovers
embrace, oblivious to all
A million people on a ten mile
beach, alone and enthralled
Love in the sands, lost
in the surf serenade
Vital, alive in live
Two young lovers embrace
ecstatically, a million eyes
watching, but alone
Enraptured,
a lover's duet
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
... [
2002-11-13 13:00:00]
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Re: A Lover's Duet
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by Roshie on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:07:52 PM AEST
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| YES! thats how it is, when everyone around you disappears and in that moment it is just you and him! =) well written! |
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Re: A Lover's Duet
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:54:21 AM AEST
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Totally 'oblivious to all', this is lovely Candice,
what a beautiful scene you've set here, it's a different feeling when loving like this in full view of so many people, yet like you say you feel so alone with that one person!
Tingly feeling again!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: A Lover's Duet
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:05:52 AM AEST
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Dean, I am so glad that you like this poem, it is one of my favorites.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: A Lover's Duet
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:19:24 AM AEST
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Like I said, it is lovely Candice, so I can see why it is.
With love
Dean:-) |
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