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The Dawn of Destruction
Contributed by
ShaBa
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:31:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my toes grasp the branch
I hunger for rare meat
I lower myself to the ground
my hands first then my heels
I begin to rise
but I fall
the grass is high
what lurks behind
hairs raise as the adrenalin pumps
can I see my next eat
or will I be eaten
I begin to rise
one foot after another
is this evolution
am I changing
I need to fill my stomach
so I step forward
I can see
it drives me onwards
Ive just changed the world.
Copyright ©
ShaBa
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2004-10-05 10:31:18]
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Re: The Dawn of Destruction
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:42:55 AM AEST
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ohhh thats different, didnt expect it to be like that atall, not bad for a first poem, look forward to reading more from you in the future,
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Re: The Dawn of Destruction
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:00:53 AM AEST
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| wow...my first poem was about Sputnic..in 6th grade LOL...it was put in the news paper..but it was nothing like this... |
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Re: The Dawn of Destruction
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:24:13 PM AEST
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bro that was really interesting...not bad!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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