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The Forgotten
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:24:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Just another Autumn leaf I be,
Whistle in the wind, alone,
Traversing the lands of far beyond,
Many miles away from Home
Shed a tiny raindrop upon my wings,
Weigh me down with all your sighs,
Push me forth with gentle breath,
As I float across the skies
Blow me forth and carry me yonder,
Lift me high and dip me low,
Caress me as I fall softly,
Upon the grains of sand below
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-10-05 10:24:07]
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Re: The Forgotten
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:35:05 AM AEST
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Wow ~
It almost seems like this is played sweetly in a piano tune . .
"Shed a tiny raindrop upon my wings" . . it's magical yet it seems so real. Imaginative and wonderous.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
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Re: The Forgotten
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:39:02 PM AEST
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so beautiful.. how true this is...
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: The Forgotten
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:54:27 PM AEST
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| hrm, is this a repost? this seems oddly familiar.... |
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