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The Pit of Insanity
Contributed by
DamentedSuicide
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:22:05 AM in AEST
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I sit in a corner holding on to your memory
My knees pulled to my chest
The knife lost on the ground
I feel for the sharpness of its blade
i watch as you invade my mind
pushing me further
I lay on the edge of madness on the brink of death
Your memory etched into my brain
I can not rid myself of you
I try and try
Your pictures lay tattered and torn at the edge of my bed
The blood covers them Hiding your piercing eyes
The thought of your arms holding me
Causes me fall into the pit of insanity.
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2004-10-05 08:22:05]
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Re: The Pit of Insanity
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:13:42 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, written with feeling, and lost emotions, found it to be cool write, and with a flowing rythem. |
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Re: The Pit of Insanity
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:25:45 AM AEST
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filled with feelings, I liked this alo
pixie xx |
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Re: The Pit of Insanity
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:01:25 PM AEST
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This saddens me immensley . . so emotional. I feel if I touch the core my fingers will bleed or something (sounds odd . . i know) . .
"i watch as you invade my mind" . . This is what your poem did to mine.
Tragic yet wonderful.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
. . .Rose. |
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Re: The Pit of Insanity
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:25:41 AM AEST
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| awesome! |
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Re: The Pit of Insanity
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:58:46 AM AEST
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| awesome poem... lots, lots, and lots of emotion... I can realate to this one so much and I understand what you are feeling... amazing write... keep up the good work. |
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