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Dark Woods
Contributed by
cj_ranson
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:01:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I wake up in a forest
Night is as dark as Satans soul
I turn my head to see old trees
Not moving
Silent
I start walking
Into mist and dark
I hear whistling wind
And haunting moans
I turn my head again
Just the forest
Just my breathing
Just my footsteps
I walk up the path
Until I arrive in a town
"......."
Silence
"......."
No-one is here
Its a ghost town
Just the forest
Just my breathing
Just my footsteps
Starry night it is
Little stars light the sky
But they haunt my mind
Along with this place
That I can never find
"......."
Just the forest
Just my breathing
Just my footsteps
Going nowhere fast
Copyright ©
cj_ranson
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2004-10-05 07:01:40]
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Re: Dark Woods
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:04:11 AM AEST
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s c a r e y
nice write
cheers!~ |
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Re: Dark Woods
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:04:50 AM AEST
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This is so atmospheric. It seems to be an indulgence in an immortal escapism. Although I feel haunted by it, I wish you could have shared that nightmare with I.
~*~ Valentine ~*~ |
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Re: Dark Woods
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:11:13 AM AEST
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a very scary and chilling write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dark Woods
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:19:04 AM AEST
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| Freaky poem, and weird dream, something I will pass on my dreams leave alot ot be desired at the best of times. But this was awesome the way it flowed, and the images created, left no doubt as to what the poem is about. |
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Re: Dark Woods
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by Row on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:17:09 AM AEST
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| say... not bad! I believe i like this sean |
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Re: Dark Woods
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 05:25:30 PM AEST
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| You could really feel it like almost i was there. The suspense was good and how you set out the poem is very original. Good work |
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