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Hell
Contributed by
screwup
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:57:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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there is this place
this place called hell
the fires come up
and burn those who are not well
people hate each other
no love at all
everyone is suffering
like a little numb doll
people commiting suicide
everyone in pain
eveyone bleeding
nothing to gain
people crying out
people that cut
thinking about suicide
stuck in a rut
we betray each other
some dead inside
which is why we cut
so we can hide
some just want to escape
so they can put a gun to their head
pull the trigger
and then they're dead
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Re: Hell
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:00:23 AM AEST
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| Painful write and a lot of pain in the world.. |
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Re: Hell
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:04:40 AM AEST
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i know of the place you talk of, but I have fought and fought to pull myself out of this hole and I am finally at a plcae that I want to be, I wish that for you too, an emotional write, very sad and pained
pixie xx |
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Re: Hell
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:55:32 AM AEST
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Deanna...
I... too... know this place well... maybe not to the extent that u and others do... but I've been there...
U're on ur way to getting out of there... just keep walking towards the target of geting out... okay....
Love ya... always...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Hell
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:44:18 PM AEST
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this is such a powerful poem.. i agree with most of what you have written, and can also relate to it too. Good write; keep it up.
charlotte x_x_x |
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