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walking alone
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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tears falling from sad eyes,
each tear stands for a lie, told from a lovers lips...
for the lips long to me met in a deep kiss,
but this face of sorrow only meets the touch of trembleing hands
the heart break of someone who doesn't understand,
this body longs for a loving touch, one the broken heart can truely trust
but none seem to come
walking alone again...but walking to try again
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Re: walking alone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:24:30 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, and composed with such heart, a poem with such true feeling and a will to try again, inspirational in a way as you feel hurt and lost yet you wont give up.
I really enjoyed the way this poem flowed and the message I saw within your words so cool. |
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Re: walking alone
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:41:07 AM AEST
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So heartbreaking and melancholic.
It has stunned me . . touched me deeply.
~*~ Valentine ~*~ |
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Re: walking alone
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:56:32 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, touching and sweet, yet sad.............Mike |
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Re: walking alone
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by Yousef on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:10:08 PM AEST
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| Good poem and well presented, and in fact it is the second poem I read today that totally remindes of "Craig David" song "I'm walking away from the troubles in my life, I'm walking away oh to find a better day", nice work an keep it up. |
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Re: walking alone
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:12:46 PM AEST
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Thisis such a great write...i only wisht that i could be that strong with my own love problems....excellent job i love it!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: walking alone
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by Trisha on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:02:41 PM AEST
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| Walking alone should never happen never be alone always having someone watching over you |
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