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Beyond The Waterfall
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:41:37 PM in AEST
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Behind the waterfall, we are
Wanting for what seems so far
Timid we are, voices hushed
We listen to the water rush
In its pitter patter flawlessness
Tumbling gently down upon us
Huddled together, holding tight
As sunset fades to star filled night
We linger there, at twilight
Anticipating the moon’s light
When the moon arrives, she sees
Two silhouettes joined so tenderly
Lost in each other so obviously
And the vision sets her free
She calls to us and we respond
Breaking the plane, we step beyond
Hand and hand we venture on
Heart to heart, we now belong
She flees across the nighttime sky
Filled with envy, we wonder why
We too cannot learn to fly
We long to know night’s other side
Silently, on the tips of our toes
We follow then as the moon goes
Down below, awash in her glow
We move ahead so we may know
Beyond the waterfall, her light
Leads us on into the night
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by waos on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:54:00 PM AEST
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| that was really good. really good. i really liked it. i could see the pictures in my mind and it just seemed to go really well. it had a lot of beauty in it. keep posting! |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by a_bear on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:04:02 PM AEST
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| I often wish I could fly..writing is my way of flying I think. lovely piece... |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:17:32 PM AEST
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truely beautiful....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:27:28 PM AEST
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| incredible |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:46:13 AM AEST
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I like this much. I've always loved the motif of wandering through darkness after light. Overall, a beautiful poem.
Bravo!
Andrew |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:05:55 AM AEST
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This is enchanting. I feel I have been touched by purity. The words present images that are so spellbinding. Reading this was like tracing my fingers across a watercolour painting, allowing my eyes and hands to appreciate such delicate beauty.
~ | Valentine | ~ |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:55:06 AM AEST
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awww this is so lovely and beautiful,
pixie xx |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:18:38 AM AEST
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oh my, oh my, oh my....
My head is full of comments,
I see so many things in this..
tenderness, tentiveness, innocense, desire, complete trust, faith...shall I go on?
This really touches me, I love it!!
You have truly captured following your dream within a dream come true...Marvolous! |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:03:47 AM AEST
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| This poem is truly awsome. I couldn't wait to read the next line. You are truly blessed.......Mike |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:46:54 PM AEST
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Hmm, makes me thing there may be a new love interest in the mind of the poetess. Maybe a prospect being considered?
Lovely write,
Rita |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:12:11 PM AEST
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Beautifull write and very dreamy.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 12:54:33 AM AEST
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| Awwww... It's your 'fault' that you make me feel so weak, blue and in love with this poem!! Hey, you're really so romantic! Your wordings are just so effective. I like it!! GOOD POEM! |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:16:02 PM AEST
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What words can one say about something as beautiful as this. It evokes an emotional response that is hard to express. My best is to say..I felt this one.......
Gorgeous.
Long stemmed roses again
Larry (who promises to catch up with your writes eventually) :o) |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:18:49 PM AEST
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Incredible write....Great imagery!!
Jenni |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:55:13 AM AEST
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"When the moon arrives, she sees two silhouettes joined so tenderly Lost in each other so obviously"..truly beautiful visions..
well written. venkat
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 06:50:55 AM AEST
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This is beautiful and I have some great images in my head from this too.
New love, huh? This is really sweet.
I could just get lost in this poem.
*goes to read again*
*huggies*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by avanottingham on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:14:54 AM AEST
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Great poem! I'm really glad you commented on my poem so I could, in turn, venture here.
What a pleasure! |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 03:27:04 PM AEST
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feeling nastolgic, I had to come back.
What a memorible moment in two peoples lives, that stepping beyond to see whats out there...together. |
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Re: Beyond The Waterfall
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 03:00:48 AM AEST
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*sighs*
You write such beautiful love poems.
Timber
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