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Deep In Cut
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It was a pain she could control.
The blood ran down her arm.
Along with several more deep gashes,
that she believed couldn't cause her harm.
She cut until she could cut no more,
And here on her bed she lay.
Coming was a pain she never felt before,
When she felt the last bit of life drift away.
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2004-10-04 22:06:01]
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Re: Deep In Cut
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by waos on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:00:29 PM AEST
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| it is sad, especially the last 2 lines. good job gettin your feelings out. |
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Re: Deep In Cut
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:44:22 AM AEST
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| brilliant |
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Re: Deep In Cut
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:28:33 AM AEST
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deep man...so deep.
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