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Wes
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:06:58 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Why should it be that
Each promise of forever
Should leave you so soon
Copyright ©
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
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2004-10-04 18:06:58]
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Re: Wes
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by a_bear on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:30:16 PM AEST
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| That's beautiful |
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Re: Wes
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:19:22 PM AEST
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ohhh beautiful.... im so sorry for your loss...... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Wes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:13:22 PM AEST
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Please accept my condolescences on the loss of your friend. This is a beautiful write. I don't know if you are aware of not, but this is a combination of an acrostic/haiku. Very well done.
Rita |
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Re: Wes
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:55:15 PM AEST
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| hardhitting. i just posted a poem about broken promises. the future isnt certain in any way, and peoples hopes makes them forget that. |
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Re: Wes
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by waos on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:19:08 PM AEST
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| that was really really good! |
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Re: Wes
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 02:49:49 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed.
Sorry about your friend. |
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Re: Wes
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:49:47 PM AEST
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| Terrific way to honor his memory. It sucked that you had to go through that... |
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