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Gone
Contributed by
brokenbylove130
on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Staring into the darkness
feeling myself being pulled into it
its a good feeling
an awsome feeling
no sense of depth
just a blissful feeling of falling
never to stop
a sweet spiral downwards
the air rushing by feels like im falling through silk
spider-web thin.
im gone now
gone far away into my sanctuary
forever gone from this wretched world
never to be hurt again.
Copyright ©
brokenbylove130
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2004-10-04 17:55:21]
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Re: Gone
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:15:07 PM AEST
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| Good poem, and I'm glad that you overcome this period or the "the very bad place in your life" like you called it. |
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Re: Gone
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by Sirena_Degana on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:17:55 PM AEST
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a wonderful feeling to let go of pressure...yum!
you feel so free.... this is a good description of how it feels..
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Gone
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:32:21 PM AEST
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excellent vivid images, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Gone
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by Stitch on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:48:26 PM AEST
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A sad and introspective write that I could really feel. I even got that sense of falling away into blissful nothingness.
Nice work.
Stitch |
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Re: Gone
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:57:24 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. very nice discriptions. |
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Re: Gone
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:52:31 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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