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The Toughest Challenge
Contributed by
Yousef
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:05:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The toughest challenge is to smile while in deep of you, you want to cry
When you find yourself flowing in the air but you don't have wings to fly
I've this strange feeling but I don't have the words to describe it
As if I'm haunted by you and I got to get over it
With you my heart is vulnerable like glass, but with others as if it's made of steel
And that's why I'm wondering how will I ever love another girl a love that's real?
I see you everywhere as if you possessed my mind
And another true love is something I may never find
Sometimes I wonder will I ever find someone who understands
Will I ever find a girl who can touch my heart with her hands?
Some times I lie awake from dusk till dawn
And I need someone who can help me to carry on
I'm looking for a girl who can force her way into my heart
I'm looking for a girl who can help me to restart
Is there's a remedy that can heal this pain
Is there's a hope that I can have feelings once again
The toughest challenge is to have a dream that will never come true
The toughest challenge is to have a future that doesn't include you
Yousef Hani
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Yousef
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2004-10-04 17:05:42]
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by a_bear on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:39:25 PM AEST
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| I think I know that feeling..someone has posession of my heart as though it may never be mine again..trouble is he doesn't want it. As if it's in a pawn shop...sitting on a shelf..not his, not mine..an unclaimed heart..nice title huh??? |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:06:58 AM AEST
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awww a very sad write
pixie xx |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 12:56:51 PM AEST
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I can completely relate to this.. a sad, yet beautiful write. Keep up the good work.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 07:53:48 PM AEST
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WELCOME YOUSEF TO YPDC..you will love it here, we are like one big family....and look out for each other.....loving each other alot too!
I'm so sorry this happened to you, I'm so sorry you have to feel blue. That, it seems, is one of the changes we take when we date to have a relationship.....either it is loving or turns out mean!
I hope you will be all right
Warm hugs
consue |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:40:13 PM AEST
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| Thanks all for your comments, I really appreciate it. |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:59:58 PM AEST
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| gosh, this is wonderful, amazing write xxx |
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Re: The Toughest Challenge
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 08:42:28 AM AEST
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The toughest challenge is to have a future that doesn't include you
I love that, that is nice... I REALLY LIKE IT, but i think whatever happens happens for a reason in like.. Maybe she wasn't meant to be included in you're future maybe it was for the best she isn't.. To me what ever happens in life happens for a reason.. and it's always for the best because you always bond to meet sopmeone else and you fall in love and get married... So basically it happens for a reason for the best |
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