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Please don't let me go
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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stop the pain please
i can't take it anymore
i didn't mean to do this
it wasn't supposed to be like this
everything i am will be gone in minutes
and i'm the reason why.'
i've taken my own life away from me
and i've done it on my own
no one's here to help me now
no one knows in a short time i'll be gone forever
my life taken from me
by my own hands
how could i be so stupid
what the hell was i thinking
the pain won't stop
and i'm trying to stop the bleeding
but the life is draing from my body
everythings getting blury
oh how i wish the pain would end
but at the same time i don't
because if it ends that mean it's truly over
my life has truly ended
and i will be here no more
atleast in this life i feel something
i don't want to feel nothing
please pain stay
don't let me go
keep me here forever
or as long as i can endure you
i don't want to die yet
please don't let me go
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Re: Please don't let me go
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by valentine on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:47:21 PM AEST
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This actually encouraged me to form a tear in my eye. It's so despondent and wretched.
One can't read it with out being saddened.
~ Valentine ~ |
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Re: Please don't let me go
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:05:47 PM AEST
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| It's really good poem, I liked it, and I'm so glad that you are not going to do anything like this (lol). Keep it up. |
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Re: Please don't let me go
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by tractorbabe on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 07:41:56 PM AEST
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| awsome poem loved it very well ritten |
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Re: Please don't let me go
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:56:43 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Please don't let me go
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:11:04 PM AEST
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Mishi**
I cried when I read this, you know I love you.. Keep up the good work its better then mine *lol* I Love You!!
Good Luck
4 Evr Xx bunny xX |
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