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Survived
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:21:56 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
" Survived "
While driving my car stopped at an intersection with a red light
I was thinking about my sweet heart on this fine Friday night
I looked over to my left and then to my right
Now I will describe to you a terrible sight
There was this guy with a gun who broke my glass
He climbed inside and said, let’s go or I’ll kill your ass
The light turned green, off we went down the street
My heart was pounding, my hands were sweaty, feeling some heat
The awful smell of this guy was making me sick
I was trying to think of a way to get out of this quick
I suddenly felt a nudge in my ribs with his gun
I really thought my time in life was really done
I saw a chance up the road, an oncoming train
I could jump and survive and live with some pain
I hit the ground, looked around and I was free
I never thought this crime filled life would reach out to me
I live my life an honest way and cherish our God
He was there to help me by protecting my bod
Its really sad to think that many people just don’t care
I only survived through God’s great love, this I will forever share!!!!!
By James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 James L. McHenry
Copyright ©2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
© 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright ©2004 Heartfelt TM
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Re: Survived
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:49:58 AM AEST
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A great emotional write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Survived
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 10:58:44 AM AEST
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| hey man!thats kinda scarry!i wouldnt know what to do if that happened to me!yeah i do i would crap on myself!you are brave&respectable poet,thats cool!im glad you give your survival credit to god!your guardian angel must have been there too!well i will have to look at all of your poems,ps please come read my poem forgotten it is about my journey to god,love,peace&chicken grease! |
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