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VANITY part 2
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:07:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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looking at me ,why cant i see,
how ugly i can be,
the circles under my eyes,
are no suprise,my tears are my demise,
pale white skin,makes me look sick,
like someone pelted me upside the head with a brick!
my hair all frizzy and nappy,
my whole look is crappy,
my face is broken out ,i just want to shout!
i hate the way i look i never want to go out!
im so tired of looking in the mirror and seeing me,
but there is no one else i would rather be,
i might not be pretty,
i might not look smart,
but one think i do have that sets us apart,
my art,
i might look rough,but what beauty is in my mind!
in everything is something pretty,with me its just hard to find.
Copyright ©
blackholesun
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2004-10-04 09:07:58]
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Re: VANITY part 2
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:17:26 AM AEST
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Your beauty shines from within, bathing your words, with the richness of your thoughtful mind. You only see what you wish to see, yet I see a beautiful personality, and I feel honored to have you as a friend.
Such beautiful words, yet with a hint of sadness, but yet they do hold some hope.
Awesome poem.
Take Care
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Re: VANITY part 2
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 03:10:03 PM AEST
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so true the beauty comes from within you just have to find it even though most of the time its really hard...good luck but i know you can find it!
great job "chick"
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Re: VANITY part 2
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 10:59:25 AM AEST
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| very good write...good |
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