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sometimes
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:00:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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sometimes you have to loose it
all before you find your way,
as us all, i have seen many things
all the experience life brings,
i've known great loss and seen pink sunsetts
i've started over from nothing again,
i have traveled afar and home once more
sitting, delving memories as i look out my door,
i write into the universe when i pen
thinking of the lucid past and when,
once my heart held a smile so warm
till life crushed it; im so insufferably human,
ahhh... what do i want in this life?
truely right this moment i do not know,
safe, warm, prissy dog snoring at my side
i'm pretty content with the way things flow,
were i to die would my words be remembered?
or past along to my future heirs?
these thoughts run through my mind tonight
was my life dark or bright,
did i touch someone and light up their life
did my poetry bring pain or delight?
sometimes you have to loose it all
before you can really feel,
then you find what's real.
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Re: sometimes
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:54:12 AM AEST
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Aaah..my dearest friend..it is a great review of life past and present..many memories..
many thoughts flooding up..a superb write.
...big huggies..soo well written.sincerely..:-) venkat |
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Re: sometimes
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:22:59 AM AEST
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Oh yes my friend, Your writing touches many.
I really admire your strength, girlfriend.
I jus don't think I could handle dealing with the hand u've been delt in life. We all have our croses to bare but u keep going, and going, and going like the energizer bunny.
Hang tuff girl.
You've always been a good friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Great write, photo and music. |
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Re: sometimes
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:35:26 AM AEST
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What a sad and beautiful poem .
well done. |
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Re: sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:38:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful work.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: sometimes
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:55:32 AM AEST
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awwwww Nessa, this is a very moving write, you are one of my dearest friends on ypdc and I hold you very close to my heart, you are an amazing woman, you always shine,
takecare my friend
pixie xx |
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Re: sometimes
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:37:31 AM AEST
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Sweet, sweet Nessa......surely your words will be remembered....and know that you have touched this heart!!
Hugs to you.....(Hold the dogs)
Jenni |
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Re: sometimes
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by bernard on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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LadyFawn A most lovely poem especially this verse.
did i touch someone and light up their life
did my poetry bring pain or delight?. you have certainly touched my life with your very kind comments and I cannot see you as someone that has delivered pain. Keep smiling my dear hugs from bernard.
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Re: sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:04:25 AM AEST
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Nessa, my sage friend. Your words resonate through our universe. They send love and kindness and understanding to many hearts and minds. Your words have saved me many times from falling apart or dieing within my grief. My love and friendship will be yours and will be in my heart always.
Blessed be
Rita |
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Re: sometimes
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:56:13 AM AEST
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| A very beutiful poem indeed, and the music is fantastic, I really liked it specially the line that says "were i to die would my words be remembered? or past along to my future heirs?", very good one, keep it up. |
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Re: sometimes
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:49:00 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa so beautiful and you always touch me not only with your writing but just you being you your a wonderful friend
super hugs
Michelle |
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Re: sometimes
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by theMoth on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 02:43:07 PM AEST
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What can I say?
You're one of the best.
--Mothy |
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Re: sometimes
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by Archie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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| Great poem full of wisdom and life. I always enjoy reading your poetry. |
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Re: sometimes
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by RhythmBndt on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:00:18 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem. & lovely pic as well :) |
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Re: sometimes
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by valentine on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:13:38 PM AEST
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Exceptional.
"did i touch someone and light up their life
did my poetry bring pain or delight?" . . you have sent both pain and delight through this poem . . and the beauty of it touches me gently.
~ Valentine ~ |
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Re: sometimes
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by Alovinmann on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:45:18 AM AEST
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You certainly touched me and YES you did light up my life! In memories and in present thoughts of you are a beacon to a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart.
Kisses
Paul |
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Re: sometimes
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by inoc on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:38:07 PM AEST
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oh dear
your poem is so G*O*O*D*!
now ...that is how I would love to write poems
but I think you are gifted to make everyone smile
oh ladyfawn you are brilliant
cheers!~ |
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Re: sometimes
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:30:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem! What a clear insight you show here. Really a joy to read.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: sometimes
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:58:55 AM AEST
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| Wow! Your poem is so thought provoking. Makes me ponder about life in general... life... life... life... Nice background music, nice picture and last but not least, fantastic poem. I like this SOOOO much. Thanks. |
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Re: sometimes
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:46:39 PM AEST
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Ahhhh nessa.... i don't think any of us really know what we want. I guess we just keep going with the hope that we might figure it out one day.
Lovely, thought provoking poem-
SNM |
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Re: sometimes
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 07:16:45 PM AEST
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You have penned the questions I think we all ask of ourselves. This is such a soul searching write.... and so very wise.
Roses my dear friend
Larry |
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Re: sometimes
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:35:20 PM AEST
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And yet another beautiful write. Actully brought tears to my eyes.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: sometimes
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:28:40 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is very relatable! Really makes you sit back and look at your life and think, so what have I done? What is my life? Where am I now, what will I become? Questions that nag at most people's subconscious I think.. or at least most women's lol. My favourite line: "im so insufferably human" - that says it all :) |
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Re: sometimes
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:26:23 PM AEST
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A very moving poem here. Your poetry has touched me, it's all really beauitful.
Scott |
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Re: sometimes
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by colinb on
Monday, 21st July 2014 @ 02:17:31 AM AEST
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| A touching write Nessa |
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