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Mystic World
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:27:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I do not know how to stop it
maybe I should not care
My mind begins to wander
taking me I don't know where
Some places are fantastic
others not so good
I am in a Mystic World
I don't know if I should
Be here in this place
enjoying what I do
For all my lifes great fantasies
have always been with you
Maybe if I am patient
you will come with me
This wonderful Mystic World
together we will see
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-03 22:27:06]
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Re: Mystic World
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:29:33 PM AEST
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Life is sometimes very mytic but that way we never get bored.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Mystic World
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:36:39 PM AEST
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very sweet, well written and romantic bruce:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mystic World
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by venkat on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:34:42 AM AEST
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| simple..but very sweet poem...Venkat |
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Re: Mystic World
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by tifrob on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:46:35 AM AEST
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Simple and intriging. Good Job.
J~ |
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Re: Mystic World
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by shelby on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:19:15 AM AEST
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very peaceful poem
Michelle |
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Re: Mystic World
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by shanarah on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 05:30:36 AM AEST
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Exhilarated my spirit once again...
take care,
shanarah |
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Re: Mystic World
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by pixie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:00:32 AM AEST
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a wonderful write Bruce , truly wonderful,
pixie xx |
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