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Disappear
Contributed by
tractorbabe
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:14:14 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Disappear
You cant make her stay
You cant keep her away
But before you let her go
There’s something you otta know
She aint like the other ones
Once she’s hurt she’s gonna run
To get away from all the pain
You caused her the day it rained
She cant sleep with out some light
Afraid your memory just might
Find her laying there
In the darkness by the stairs
Crying away the tears
The pain that holds her here
She cant find the words to say
That shell leave him someday
It hurts to much to think
That maybe just one more drink
Will kill the pain today
And make your love go away
But why is she lying there
The pain he caused just wont disappear
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Re: Disappear
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:32:41 PM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
I think we all have a tendacy to run from pain.
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emy |
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Re: Disappear
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:17:46 AM AEST
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A good poem and well written too, I really like the last two lines "But why is she lying there
The pain he caused just wont disappear", Good effort. |
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Re: Disappear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 05:31:49 PM AEST
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i love poems that rhyme...partially because i can't rhyme well myself.
beautiful...sadly, darkly beautiful.
i feel "her" pain...so sad. but - that's what makes poetry awesome - the ability to make the reader feel the emotions portrayed in a few lines and stanzas.
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