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I wish
Contributed by
Lovely_4_Steve
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:39:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why do you do this...
Pretending you're not mad at me...
Acting like you care,
Saying you love me when you don't have to.
Is it because I'm getting attched to quickly?
I don't mean to... Maybe I just need to leave,
Leave this place,
Run.
Run forever with out stopping
I wish I could run through the vally with out a care
I wish I could step outside of this wicked place
and scream with all my might
just to be away from all this pain and hurt
I'm so depressed it's not like it matters my world is crumbling into two
I hate this!
I hate being locked up forever in this enturnal place,
with my chains keeping me pinned here for you to torture and make me suffer
I hate it!
I just wish I could get out and break free
why in the ***** hell do you have to make me suffer?!?!?!?
Why cant I just be free..
I wish I could be free and run away forever
with out looking back, without a care in the world
God!! I scream at you,
pushing you away yelling at you,
with all my might but you just push me back not caring
I wish I could run away forever with out looking back,
Run through the vally with out stopping..
Screaming as I run
Breaking free from this tortured place
and leaving my tortured soul in my chained place.
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2004-10-03 21:39:48]
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Re: I wish
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:46:57 PM AEST
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| good write. especially the last two verses. |
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Re: I wish
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by Yousef on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 09:04:02 AM AEST
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| You made me feel sad and this means your poem is good because you succceded in transfering your emotions to me by words and that's is called "Talent", I really liked the last few lines, Keep it up. |
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Re: I wish
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:36:18 PM AEST
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this is a great poem... my poems are not better then yours... your poems are better then mine.. i love your poems... they're great... great write... i really liked it
~!*!~lylasa~!*!~
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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