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Response
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:58:33 PM in AEST
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ThankYouPoems
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What you've done for me I could never describe
You've seem to forgiven all my dumb lies
Just when I thought you had let me go
You rescued me your love did show
I'll never understand I can't comprehend
Why to me you lent a helping hand
When all hope and faith were gone
You were there...with love for me all along
I know one thing for sure
My prayers were answered when I saw you walk thru that door
A blessing I will hold closest to my heart
A love I've learned a father, and daughter should never be apart
I am sorry for all my ways
Especially, most recent painful days
Although, Thank-you seems to little to say
Just know how much I love you each and everyday.
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lovesucks
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2004-10-03 20:58:33]
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Re: Response
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:08:07 PM AEST
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| very nice. you need to revise some of the grammar in here because of the rhythym, but i think this is an excellent write. |
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Re: Response
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:44:30 AM AEST
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This is so gracious, and heartfelt.....when a parent receives such a poem from their child, you can't possibly image how it pulls at their heart strings! Now that I know your true story Theresa let me commend you for your great bravery............and for the marvelous love that you now share with a wonderful father who surely did CARE!
This is a rivoting love story indeed!
Very enjoyable!
Warm love to you and your father too!
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Re: Response
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by FatherTom on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 06:50:47 PM AEST
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Hmmm....looks like some of the old man rubbed off after all ;)
Thank you not only for the poem but for making the effort I always knew you were capable of.
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