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Broken Promises
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:32:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Broken Promises
You brought me down
Further than ever
You made me fall
When it really mattered
You drowned me
With the pain given
You shattered my reflection
In an instant
Words have no meaning
With the promises broken
The shattered glass is used
To my advantage
To forget what happened
Each time the pain was felt
With the let down of your words
That were never fulfilled
And left me broken
With scars to heal
You promised the world
And so much more
You let me down
With each of your words
With the broken glass
I forget the pain felt
And fulfill the promise
To get where I was before
You destroyed my world
And left me broken
With scars to heal
From the pain felt
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Re: Broken Promises
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:44:05 PM AEST
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i was feeling this a year ago, all promises and no truth, love hurts, excellent poem, it really touched my heart... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Broken Promises
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by lb12 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:25:56 PM AEST
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| all i can say is: amazing |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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| A promise should never be broken! Well done! Christina |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Archie on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:11:32 AM AEST
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| I understand these words very well. You have written a very emotional poem here. Great write. |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:40:19 PM AEST
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| really good work i enjoyed it very much! |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:07:14 PM AEST
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another plus to what u write on here..I like this one..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:43:01 PM AEST
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| So direct, so ***** real. |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 01:20:30 PM AEST
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Amazing, great write.
Spazzo |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:03:14 PM AEST
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| This is such a heart touching poem. Beautifully written. Keep your head held high. Love will return to you. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:49:08 PM AEST
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If only more people would realize just how much words hurt... In my opinion, broken promises will always hurt much more than nearly any physical wound I could ever endure.
"Words have no meaning
With the promises broken"
^So very true...Wonderfully expressed. |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:46:29 AM AEST
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This broke my heart, I really felt for you.
(( )) Hugs, bunches of them.
It was a powerful emotional write.
Kie |
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Re: Broken Promises
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:03:37 PM AEST
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wow you really did a wonderful job...it really hurts when someone breaks their promises...it hurts deep within....good job
please comment on my work too
summer |
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