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questionable
Contributed by
chocolate_girl
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:01:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once I wrote a love song, I gave it to him too
but then one night it got so stale, I don't know if it's still true
I know that i'm in love, I've felt it, winter to fall
but I think the lust has fizzled out into a big wax ball
please relight the candle, I can't live out there alone
but something's got to change, make me feel back at home;
In your arms and in your bedroom, right now it isn't right,
I know if u read my writing, it'd be awful, i'l feel so 'tight'
but the baseline is I love You, cant bear when you're away
I think of you every moment apart please don't let our love go stray
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2004-10-03 18:01:27]
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Re: questionable
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by Yousef on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:15:00 PM AEST
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| Good effort, and Good luck. |
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Re: questionable
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by 8kiwi8 on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:34:50 AM AEST
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| more than god effort, thats a great poem! it's really good how you can put one feeling like that into words like this and i got shivers reading it i really like it. love ya, kayli x x x |
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