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Today like Many
Contributed by
aallmmhh
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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As I held the blade
I carved your name
In huge letters on my leg
Like it is in my brain
Today is not the first
Theres been many times before
And I know why, it's like a curse
Each time they find me on the floor
Today is like many
In fact, it's now habit
Like you ditching me,
I take it out on myself
And instead of cutting, I'm stabbing
Focused on the sight of blood
I forget why I'm sad
When my cuts finally dry like mud,
Once again, I feel so bad.
Outside is sunny,
But I can't feel it inside where I am
Which is on the floor once again....
Because today is like many.
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aallmmhh
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2004-10-03 16:27:35]
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Re: Today like Many
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by MiSS_B on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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| i like ur poem kidd, i felt like that sometimes...we get along well knowing about each other's probs. :) nice poem kid. |
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Re: Today like Many
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:20:34 PM AEST
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| excellent. i think this is my favorite psychotic poem out of the ones ive read. you wrote it very well, that must be why =] |
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Re: Today like Many
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 03:34:27 AM AEST
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| i love it! nice work |
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Re: Today like Many
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 01:16:05 PM AEST
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| sad poem. I wish you wouldn't do this. I liked your poem because can understand it. Many poems Have to sit and think .. Rather not. keep writing and write when you feel like you want to cut then maybe you wont cut. |
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