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Lonely
Contributed by
twisterchaser
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:31:31 PM in AEST
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I'm lonely.... I'm mister lonely, I have no one to call my own!
Words of a song that reflect my life,
I stumble and fall...words that tell of my strife.
I have found no heart on which to have my name,
too many years of hard work, long hours are they to blame?
Is it just a flawed character that rules my being?
or is it just my true heart they are not seeing?
Do I throw up my hands and walk away from all I've worked for these many years?
because is it worth the loneliness and tears?
Do I hide myself in the work to hide my fears?
I tell myself I'm building a future,
there is only one day between ... past, present, and future.
what I wouldn't give to be able to just go for a long walk and enjoy nature.
but what is the point with no hand to hold?
No heart to beat for me, no soft words, or soft touch.
Things that make a heart to glow and rush!
I'm tired, life has passed me by.
not a tear shed not even a sigh;
What will I leave to show I was here?
material gain? when it is gone who will care.
So that is why I'm lonely... yes mister lonely...
I have no one to call my own...
not even my beautiful little one...
By Andy
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Re: Lonely
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:48:40 PM AEST
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This poem just made me want to hug you! I've been there you know... I hope things work out for you. Oh! And my favorite line was
"there is only one day between ... past, present, and future."
it's true |
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Re: Lonely
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:36:02 PM AEST
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Ohh god this upset me..so beautifully conveyed are your feelings
Dont be sad.and lonely ..
Kelly x |
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Re: Lonely
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by inoc on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:48:25 PM AEST
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yes I loved that line too(stated above) and I also felt so sad for you...all work and no one to play with hope things will turn around soon and
I hope you will find someone to keep you company
loved your write though
cheers!~ 5 stars |
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Re: Lonely
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:27:14 PM AEST
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| heartwrenching. other people do impact our lives greatly, but they arent necessities, they are just "luxuries" |
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Re: Lonely
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:34:08 PM AEST
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awww.... andy, this one is so sad, cheer up buddy:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Lonely
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by arden on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:18:13 AM AEST
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very sad, emotional poem.
rhyme was good, awesome depth.
great work. keep it up.
Arden |
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