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Trapped Behind The Mirror
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:16:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Behind the mirror I am trapped,
No-one sees as I collapse,
I can see everyone walking on by,
But silent are the screams & tears I cry.
I long to step right through the glass,
Into the real world at long last,
But I am a prisoner behind glass walls,
I need help to get up after my falls,
I touch the glass but it tears my skin,
Blood seeps out from deep within,
It’s razor sharp just like a knife,
Threatening to take away my life.
Each day I pace up & down,
Finally crumbling into a heap on the ground,
Exhausted from all my emotional strain,
I’m feeling the damage from all past pain.
Free is a word that isn’t in my book,
Along with freedom my sanity was took,
Behind this mirror I will one day cease to be,
As being trapped will be the death of me.
Around I crawl until that fateful day,
Waiting for eternal sleep to fall my way,
I don’t know how to live I just exist,
I am a trapped ,forgotten soul that has been missed.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-03 11:16:07]
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:30:38 AM AEST
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its only a parrallel universe, we are all in there right next to you, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:34:06 AM AEST
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| You are so awesome and I am so drawn to your meaningful packed poetry. I wonder how many others actually see and understand the message contained within this beautiful word art composed by a great poet. Beautiful job. Your Friend, MickeyPigKnuckles :o) |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by MysticFireFairy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:35:43 AM AEST
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| What a interesting poem I felt like i was actually there....You had such a deph and set the illusion i loved it...keep it up! |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by Yousef on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:52:47 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, really is, I really do love your style, it's unique, good idea and well written, now I can say I'll always wait for your new poems because they deserve being read. |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:14:02 PM AEST
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very powerful poem pixie, traps, cage, prison what
ever u call it, it aint a pretty site, mine is my mind,
i hate 2 sound lik a comercial, but boy they nailed it
" A mind is a terrible thing 2 waist " not 2 mention,
a heart, this poem screams of the computer screen
such honesty and openess, i envy your conviction,
keep it coming . . . Dorian : ) |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by Archie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:35:10 PM AEST
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| I feel like that sometimes. To me the reflection is the reality I want to be in and reality is the mirror. That is just my opinion. |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by lovesucks on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:15:17 PM AEST
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I think your title is awesome because trapped behind the mirror you cannot see yourself and at some of the worst times in my life I didn't even look in the mirror so I guess I was trapped behind at some point.
thank you |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:03:45 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Trapped Behind The Mirror
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 08:47:12 AM AEST
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| Your words saddened me. I'm working on sending you some good vibes. Peace! |
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