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WHEN YOU FIND ME,KILL ME!
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:48:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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please come find me,
who ever you are,
normal or bizar,
take me away from here,
somewhere far not near,
kill me if you will,
shed my blood,let it spill,
run me to death,
inhale my breathe,
take me im too weak to fight,
take my life tonight,
i tremble awaiting the night,
you will steal me sleeping,
the fairytale for weeping,
in the shadows you are creeping,
yerning in your head,
fantasy calls to you,
to hide in the shed,
with a vision of infa red,
you crave me dead,
but not in the grave,
you rather get pleasure if i am a slave,
bending to your every desire,
im scared that you burn like fire,
smoldering orange,
i gasp in,
you hold me till the bitter end,
caress my dying wish,
with your soul survivor dish,
my heart you serve,do squeeze,
set my mind at ease,
use me abuse me,
beat me into the ground where my soul is bound,
to this hell,
i fell to the ground,
begging please no!
dont leave me alone please dont go,
im lost by night i havent a light inside,
staying here with demons i hide,
who am i ?
what is this place?
why cant i be saved?
am i so depraved,of my only life,
i would kill myself!hand me the knife,
but you couldnt do that,
so there we sat in fears,
dried of all my tears,
you mutilate what remains,
my body,the blood drains,
enjoy me while i last my body is dying fast,
memories do fade of the past.
Copyright ©
blackholesun
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2004-10-03 10:48:27]
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Re: WHEN YOU FIND ME,KILL ME!
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:03:02 AM AEST
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| Okay Brit this is a bit scary. What the hell is going on? Halloween scare tactics? lol Anyway if anyone did try to harm you they'd have to answer to me and a few other road dogs out here!!Take care you creepazoid!!!ha ha that's what Joesie would say. Much peace! |
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Re: WHEN YOU FIND ME,KILL ME!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:24:38 AM AEST
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A freaky poem, and why would you wish such a tragic ending?
Still you obvissly have your reasons, though I found this poem graphic it still was written well and with a talent to wow, or scare as this poem seems to install, you know how to make your words create such vivid images.
Awesome write and thank you for inviting me to read. |
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Re: WHEN YOU FIND ME,KILL ME!
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:38:55 PM AEST
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You have some other
freaky-cool poems!
I will have to
remeber to keep
checking these out.
--Mothy |
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