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A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:37:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Finding Out How,
Her Death Begins.
Bloody Tear Drops,
Falling Down.
Screaming Inside.
Her Mouth - No Sound.
Pleading Sorrows,
Drowning Soul.
Nothing Left,
To Make Her Whole.
Choking Tears,
Inside Her Throat.
Clutching Tight,
Her Suicide Note.
Living Nightmares,
Every Day.
Haunting Voices,
Have Their Say.
Weaving Ribbons,
Trail Down Her Skin.
Caused From The Pain,
She Feels Within.
A Shattered Soul,
A Shattered Heart.
Nothing Else Left,
To Tear Apart.
The Darkest Black,
Swallowed Me Whole.
And Tore Apart,
My Helpless Soul.
A Shattered Angel,
With Shredded Wings.
Listened To The Song,
The Devil Did Sing
Copyright ©
Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-10-03 10:37:55]
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:17:38 AM AEST
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wow, just wow, I am so glad that you pulled through, well done to you *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by FatherTom on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:23:54 PM AEST
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| Glad you pulled through. While the poem is quite dark it is well written. I say you put the whole ordeal as well as this poem behind you. Likely their are many more people that love you dearly than you might be aware of. Reach out them and let them help you. |
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:59:35 PM AEST
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| great poem i loved it |
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:05:54 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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this was a great write.... i'm glad you decided not to do this.... and again... great write...
*hugs*
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: A shattered Angel, with shredded wings
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:41:25 AM AEST
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wow
thats all i can say |
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