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Waltz of my broken heart
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:44:36 AM in AEST
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When we first began
our great romancing
it seemed like the earth
was dancing with us
Emotions were rising
like seedlings were growing
opening doors that were nuturing us
The sun shined upon us
The open sea called us
No challenge was too great to bear
yet little did I know
that you were just playing
leading me down a road unto dispair
(Bridge)
New love was once a great force unto me
When I was trapped by your enthralling gaze
For you I would have done most anything
Then one day you went away.
(Chorus)
All I ever do is cry and cry
ever since the day you told me good bye
like a light that slowly fades to dark
the music you left me is the waltz of my broken heart
Oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh
Your love was so fleeting
enthralling and weaknening
I barely could walk when you entered the room
But one fateful night
so unexpectedly
You told me that our love was through
( bridge and chorus)
This is the first waltz I have ever written. Find a waltz and play it in the background as you read these lyrics and you will see how the lines work. Modified 4/09/05
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-03 07:44:36]
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Re: Waltz of my broken heart
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 09:48:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful song Archie. Yet so sad it hurts so much to have a broken heart sometimes takes years if not forever to get over the hurt and pain.
I pray you are alright now
Love Sweetangelukxxx
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Re: Waltz of my broken heart
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:42:10 PM AEST
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| verry nice archie, like your style . . . Dorian : ) |
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Re: Waltz of my broken heart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:20:16 PM AEST
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ohhh archie, very moving piece.......... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Waltz of my broken heart
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by Remy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:50:55 PM AEST
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now i've got a spattered picture of some poor soul wailing behind an open mic with an acoustic ballad, this is nice writing... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Waltz of my broken heart
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:30:46 PM AEST
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So sad but written well. It's really sad that many out there only know how to play with the idea of luv.
Hang tuff, my friend.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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