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Love is Missed
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Roaming the streets in dumped despair,
Reminders of you everywhere
Without you here I just subsist;
Love is missed.
No more shared coffee in bed,
The croissants squashed under my head
Remembering how deep you kissed;
Love is missed.
Passing the café where love was hatched,
What happened when we were so well matched?
Striking you off my Christmas list;
Love is missed.
Daily sessions of straightening my spine,
Pain today - most definitely mine
I understand I’ve been dismissed;
Love is missed.
No more of me grieving, no more pining,
Every breakup has a silver lining
I won’t call you if symptoms persist
- But you are missed.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2004-10-03 07:22:00]
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Re: Love is Missed
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:21:11 AM AEST
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I like the way you did this one.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Love is Missed
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by Remy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:05:28 PM AEST
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well versed, i like the style... and well the emotions match the picture quite well. good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Love is Missed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:59:44 PM AEST
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This was wonderful.
Striking you off my Christmas list, -that line made me say awe.....
I really liked this one.
~Breezy |
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