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Future Untold
Contributed by
MyInspiration
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Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Theres an odd tension between us, I wish you were here. To explain our situation, theres nothing left to fear. I finally did it, my soul has been revealed. My pain has stopped, but am I healed?
I may be healed but I have not forgotten. The pain you casued, the suffering I started. Through your eyes I can see joy, happiness and remorse, this isn't our final course. Our lives are here, for us to make, lets take a chance, for our own sake. Lets put it all behind us, becasue my agony has ceast, can we just hold each other? To put my soul at peace? But please, lets not forget what makes us who we are.
You have healed me, but not without pain. You have held me close, I hope not in vain. Then again, are we meant for each other, is it all a game? Maybe so, but let me whisper your name. Let us have something whether its forever or never. Give me something to have and to hold. Give me your heart, our future is still untold.
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Re: Future Untold
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 01:03:32 AM AEST
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| I rally liked this I hope your future will get better! Christina |
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Re: Future Untold
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:04:12 AM AEST
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| The sentimentality and longing shine through like a beacon in the night. This stirs passion and emotion within me. Good write. |
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Re: Future Untold
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:15:11 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: Future Untold
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 04:41:28 AM AEST
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Absolutely Beautiful, i really
enjoyed this it reminded me of
alot of things, Thanks for sharing
this one, Keep em' coming
And welcome to YPDC
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Future Untold
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 08:00:42 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc... This is really a lovely write.... needs a bit of a spell check tho... But otherwise, it's just great!!! Hope to see more from you..
Jenni |
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Re: Future Untold
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:31:16 PM AEST
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keep writing
in the future . |
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