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Broken record - when scars itch
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:25:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This rainy feeling, storm cloud thoughts thundering through my head,
Echoing its evil temptation, telling of the passage of the dead.
The razor cuts deep in the shower, blood mingles in with the pain,
Love and hate mix together as one and the emotions swirl down the drain.
When scars itch, feelings repeat, like memories on a record in your mind.
Over and over and over again, unable to find the button to rewind.
Morphine for the cravings as night melts slowly into day
The blade tickles my inhibitions and sweeps them all away
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2004-10-03 06:25:27]
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by Remy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:54:32 PM AEST
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uggs, that's why i stay away from the drinks! the boys get their drinks and i get my sobe green tea! yess'm i do. oh yea, dark and interesting writing... i like it! ;0)
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by tractorbabe on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:01:42 PM AEST
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| wow! i loved it |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by metro on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:31:44 AM AEST
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| i'm a fan.... it sucks me in... |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:38:59 AM AEST
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| Nice...short but succinct.Note to self: don't drink on stormy nights. |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:10:03 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write, slighly morbid, but with feeling, driving a clear message and picture home, awesome poem. |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by Novocane on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 08:01:57 AM AEST
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sounds sort of like me on a bad day..
one thing-
hope u never cut yourself with a razor in a shower,
it kills
good poem |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 02:51:32 PM AEST
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Firstly, I must thank you for commenting on
my poems. Secondly, I must say this was
bloody awesome and i was left craving for
more. I loved the images of the razor cutting
deep in the shower and taking morphine for
the cravings whether those are cravings for
drugs or for cutting is left up to the reader's
imagination. A wonderfully vivid poem I am off
to read more by you!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by ladymaki on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:47:56 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing..I love the rhyming! I wish I could rhyme like that lol. Thanks for commenting on 'This One's for You'! |
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Re: Broken record - when scars itch
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:56:34 AM AEST
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Oh I like this
marvelous flow.
The Wind |
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