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Unseen
Contributed by
Black13
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Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:25:55 AM in AEST
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My bittersweet memories haunt
and I seem unable to find sleep.
Though I know it was not love
this obsession still has a hold on me.
Faceless and faithless
I walk vaguely
through this life.
Unfound I remain today.
Unknown that I try to weep.
Trying too hard to not hate
what it is that I need.
Tired of living
this lie
with nothing inside.
No more will I know
what just can't be broken.
It's just what we all need
when our cries go unheard.
Shattered dreams will resonate
within our empty shells
when we can't seem to let go.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-10-03 02:25:55]
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Re: Unseen
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:50:26 AM AEST
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Hmm thats a very sad poem.
well done. |
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Re: Unseen
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by Remy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:54:41 AM AEST
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artsy wording, contemplative... makes you think, now that i like! good writing. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Unseen
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 03:59:44 AM AEST
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Sometimes we just have to let people in..
I have trouble getting beyond the art of the words..the beauty of it all..like bright lights shining in my eyes so that I can't think so as to find understanding...For instance,
No more will I know
what just can't be broken.
It's just what we all need
when our cries go unheard
I don't understand that at all...why do we need to understand what can't be broken.. ? |
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Re: Unseen
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by shelby on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:36:54 AM AEST
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letting go at times is one of the hardest things to do youve put your emotions into a beautiful poem sad though but nicely written and expressed
Michelle |
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Re: Unseen
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful rite jeff!
*hugs*
i hope you feel better to have let this out!
from rosie. |
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Re: Unseen
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by Archie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:07:54 AM AEST
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| I understand your words here. Great write! |
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Re: Unseen
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:41:52 AM AEST
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We all have to find it in our own way, but I wish for you inner peace and acceptance of life's bumps in the road.
Rita |
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Re: Unseen
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by pixie on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST
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a very moving write, you have done a great job of expressing your feelings here,
pixie xx |
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Re: Unseen
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:11:19 AM AEST
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Reading this today, I see it from a whole different side. I believe I have been here. It's part of the process on the pathway out. There is a choice at the end. I mean then you will be able to make choices.
Stitch |
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Re: Unseen
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 01:56:55 AM AEST
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Emotional and touching.... I'm sure lots will be able to identify with this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Unseen
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:22:02 PM AEST
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((((HUGSSS)))) Things will be all right pal. Keep on believing pal!
Great write over here! |
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Re: Unseen
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:52:48 PM AEST
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| I relate to this one more than you know. Needless to say, great write. |
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