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Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:13:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sifting thru these envelopes
I found you unexpectedly.
Between the yellowed paper and the saliva.
The archway edges holding onto memories.
Long golden strand of love
Locked beneath the seal.
.35c kept a part of you with me,
Until the envelope is taken by the carbon break-down.
Your hair will still linger inside my mind.
Tickling the memories of us onto paper,
Etched into organic forms.
I love you, like the wind loves to sing,
Like a fire loves oxygen.
Beneath the stamp and spit,
On an old decrepit envelope,
I will love you until the carbon breaks down.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-10-03 01:13:32]
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:21:39 AM AEST
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excellent title, brilliant poem, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:27:56 AM AEST
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awww It's sweet but kinda weird.
And so well written.I really like this poem alot.
Very refreshing then all the other writes.
Hugs |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:26:55 PM AEST
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| This poem rules man...I really enjoyed this write....Ahhh, love remembered...wonderful, isn't it |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by theMoth on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 05:54:11 PM AEST
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As usual, you're the man.
Glad to have you back
with new stuff.
--Mothy |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:45:43 PM AEST
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Very different but great writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:34:48 PM AEST
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I love the way the words flow from your pen.
A divergence of emotion floats
around in this poem. I really liked it.
Great work, Dane!
~Breezy |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:20:42 PM AEST
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| It's a really great poem. The imagery is wonderfully constructed. One question though, why will you only love her until the carbon breaks down? Once the physical memory is gone, your feelings will just disappear? |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 02:31:39 PM AEST
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Being carbon based yourself, you will be loving her a long time, God willing. And if you consider the carbon in bone structure, it will be even long after concious thought has departed frail form.
This one ROCKS, Dane !!!
Nazty ~ |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:38:20 AM AEST
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Bravo!!!!
I love this! Damn I love the uniqueness of your poetic voice. This is incredibly well done... it stands out... I implore you to keep writing and posting. I WILL keep reading.
And that last line! Yeh... oh yeh! (But of course, you already know).
Finding something brand new in the memory of lost love,
SNM |
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Re: Yellowed Paper Screams Of Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 08:51:57 PM AEST
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Too cute! Sometimes coming across an old love letter can be the best discovery.
I never know what I'll get when I click on one of your poems. This gave me a smile.
~Scorp |
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