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Whats Behind the Mask?
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:48:52 PM in AEST
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Hidden behind a mask
No one knows the real me
I sit in a dark corner with chains all around
People see me on the outside
But no one sees the pain I’m in
I cry at night, tears of blood falls down my face
I cut myself up with my knife
And suck on my blood
I sit in the shadows waiting for someone
But who?
Who am I waiting for?
I try to search for the answers
But I never found it
Until then, I’ll always hide behind a mask
My real identity…. no one knows
I’m The Fallen
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the_fallen
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2004-10-02 23:48:52]
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:53:37 PM AEST
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| good write. i liked the last verse. =] |
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by inoc on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:04:20 AM AEST
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A very well written poem...
the_fallen
I can sence the pain....
cheers!~ |
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by Hoots on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:38:54 AM AEST
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That was deep man....
Krystle |
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by Lee on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:30:12 AM AEST
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Interesting poem.
Do you know what else is interesting?
The Cramps have a song from their first full-length album "Songs The Lord Taught Us"
titled "What's Behind The Mask"
"What's Behind The Mask"
I been seeing you for months
Coming to this place
Now what I wanna know is, honey
When can I see your face?
I know you been hiding something
Secrets in your past
Whooo, baby, I just gotta know
What's behind the mask
Please, baby, please please
Give me one quick glance
Now how come I can't see your face when I
See what's in your pants?
Is it a skin condition?
Or an extra eye?
Surgical incision?
I keep wonderin' why (why!)
Uhhh... you ain't wearin' silver bullets
Or carving Z's in chests
It's been months since Halloween
Honey, I can't guess
Now just relax and let me lift up this edge
And let me take a peek
Ooh, let me have a look in here...
EEEEEEEEK!
Well, curiosity killed this cat
Sorry I ever asked
What I don't know can't hurt me as much as
What's behind the mask
What's behind the mask, girl
What's behind the mask
What's behind that mask, girl
Sorry I ever asked."
The Cramps, "What's Behind The Mask"
You have a more serious tone here, with likewise imagery, and this poem has its own poetic merit.
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by Dorian on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:17:30 PM AEST
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a poem that touches the heart, so sorry your in pain
(((((4 U )))) Dorian : ) |
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Re: Whats Behind the Mask?
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by SuicideParty on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 08:13:12 PM AEST
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That was amazing. I felt everything you described, in vivid detail. Loved it.
~Sam |
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