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Doctor Moriarty
Contributed by
PumpkinPie
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:41:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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You're so close and yet so far away
Still I commit myself to you,each and every day
A strain on personal relationships instilled
Nonetheless,they thrust my dreams uphill
Magnetic fields of passion and devotion
Creates a source of sincere dedication
Makes my life committed to nothing but you
You,my dream,which I can't help but pursue
Sometimes you truly seem unattainable
Leaving my heart hopeless and unstable
But my little furball keeps my heart steady
And my steadfast family keeps my mind ready
A few years to go and you will be mine
When dream and reality will finally intertwine
The day when I'll be treating animals of all kind
Will be the day my heart will truly shine
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PumpkinPie
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by DragonLuvSong on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:23:20 PM AEST
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that first thing to pop into my head when i finished reading this was "that was so cool!"
the entire time I though it was about someone you loved but didn't have, but then when it said a few years i doubted that, and then I put the title with the ending and the furry and of course the part about treating animals...that was so cool. |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:25:28 PM AEST
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Such a sweet write.....
Jenni |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:09:46 PM AEST
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ohhhh! beautiful happy poem! i know youll make it hun, your wonderful with all the animals, they told me, you know bundles writes all of them bragging about her mummy! lol, hugs n' love, nessa & group:)
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Overstated on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 04:10:43 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful and happy poem... your are a star Cindy! I loved the line 'Magnetic fields of passion and devotion
Creates a source of sincere dedication’ I loved the use of magnetic! I also loved 'But my little furball keeps my heart steady' - bless! A furball!- very cool in my opinion...
I thought this was a lovely piece, I liked the way it felt different from some of your other work - and the topic felt fresh! I know you will make an ace employee in whatever you do my friend...
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:19:34 PM AEST
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Bravo! You had me going there for a minute. I really liked this.
Stitch |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by emystar on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:12:29 PM AEST
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Very beatifull write.
Keep the faith and time will pass.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:08:31 PM AEST
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Very, VERY well done.
Keep at it....both your dream and your writing!!! |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 06:25:44 PM AEST
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You posted and didnt tell me?? BAD GIRL :o) lol This is delightful my friend.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST
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Great write. I love it.
Spazzo |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:42:59 PM AEST
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| lovely write. an excellent example of poetry. =] |
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Re: Doctor Moriarty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 12:56:38 AM AEST
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| Truly an inspiring heartwarming write. :) My mere words are not enough to explain this write. My amazement is all I can show tonight. |
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