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I'm sorry I wasn't there
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'll fall tomorrow
If you'll be there to pick me up
But today I'll stand
because I still feel pain, falling
I cant keep still though,
will you be the shoulder I lean on?
heartache is painful
will you be my doctor?
I'll fight back the tears tonight
can you be there to make me laugh?
I'll hold my own hand
If I can pretend its yours...
I'll walk however many miles
will you be my path and lead me?
you know I still love you?
I think you have an idea of how much
If my love would stretch
it would go wherever I went
until I died...
I still dream about you...
did you know that?
I'm sorry I wasn't there...
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Re: I'm sorry I wasn't there
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:17:21 PM AEST
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| I understand the feeling... its hard but somehow you gotta keep on going. another great piece. Ive missed your writes. A++++ |
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Re: I'm sorry I wasn't there
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by Chilibear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:36:51 PM AEST
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| That was b-e-a utiful. I really liked the line, i'll hold my hand, if i can pretend it's yours. Keep up the good work!- Chili |
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Re: I'm sorry I wasn't there
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:24:16 PM AEST
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| great write dani. regrets arent meant to hold you down, they are meant to push you in the right direction the next time. |
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Re: I'm sorry I wasn't there
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 04:15:43 AM AEST
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| awesome, touching, heartfelt |
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