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Remember When
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Remember when
I looked at you
it was then
you said you knew
Remember when
you held me tight
it was what you did
after I caused that fight
Remember when
I would always smile
it was then I said
I love you, and its only been a while
Remember when
I thought I did something wrong
but instead of getting mad
you laughed and wrote me a song
Remember when
you stole my heart
it was that, that kept
us from falling apart
Remember when
I sat by you in the hospital bed
you probably dont
because then you were dead
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Re: Remember When
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by MaMort on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:50:43 PM AEST
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| My god, that's really strong. I've never had any loved ones die so I don't know what it feels like. But I know how I would feel if they ever did. Great poem. |
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Re: Remember When
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:15:28 PM AEST
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very heartfelt words. strong and potent Im sorry for your loss. wishing you strength. powerful write with added sadness. A++++
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Re: Remember When
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:52:12 PM AEST
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| I don't like the ending...no no no!!!!!!! |
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Re: Remember When
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:19:58 PM AEST
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powerfully written......................... hugs n' love nessa
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