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~wishing~
Contributed by
KittyKat
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:11:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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when i c him with another girl i think
"i wish i waz her!"
b/c all i know is that i keep wishing i waz with him b/c i love him all i wanna have right now is him holding me in his arms like he used to b/c right now im lonly and i just plain out miss him dearly i just want him to come back to me but i know it wan't happen as much as i want it 2 it wont b/c he thinks that another girl is more then me just wish i could have him back all 4 myself!
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Re: ~wishing~
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:29:02 PM AEST
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| your poem needs formatting. if you are going to write this way, at least add more punctuation than just two exclamation marks and two quotation marks. i think the use of your typing short cuts makes this look like more of a childish piece than it already is. life happens, so you need to change it or deal with it. letting jealousy or wants get out of control can ruin a persons life. |
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Re: ~wishing~
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by shadowmaster_045 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:10:53 AM AEST
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i know how you feel
this last friday we had a dance, but i didn't go with her
i like her, but i am a freshman, and she is a senior
it could happen, but is highly unlikely
but i won't give up b/c she is the only one that helped me through when i did |
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