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liquor induced happiness
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:30:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The fluid sweet embrace
Warming grip of love
Push away the sorrow
And all I am scared of
Hide me from the truth
Mix in with my tears
Comfort me my evil friend
As you have for many years
Keep from the edge
Push me to the brink
The world is at its best
When I’ve had too much to drink
The twisting room is soothing
I don’t care if I can’t stand
It’s easier to give up
With the floor so close at hand
My liquor induced happiness
You say I have a problem
Of course I do, or I wouldn’t drink
It’s my easy way to solve them
To you my dear bottled friend
I thank you for your service
For when you are near
Everythings not so worthless
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:33:48 PM AEST
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I have been suduced by alcohol so many times before I have lost count lol, infact I am off to the pub now lol a great poem, filled with deep expression and meaning, alcohol is a grat number of the brain, makes things seem less harsh until we wake up in the morning *hugs*
wondeful wrote Chris,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 02:46:43 PM AEST
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ohhh so sad.... very well written:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:51:05 PM AEST
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this is gripped with sadness only because my father is an alcoholic and yeah a long story but I cant imagine how being drunk makes someone happy....I hope my father feels ashamed when he gets drunk and passes out knowing its the reason we never see him...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by Onslaught on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:41:28 AM AEST
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| Hiding from the problems of this sick world by indulging in another sick problem of this world is not honorable. Stand up, without fear, and face this meaningless existence, do not succumb to delusion and weakness, never take the easy way out, or you become just like all the people I hate. |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 07:28:08 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:14:29 AM AEST
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so many ways to read this, an intruiging write... love the layers in this!
-smelly_man! |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by Aquaelius on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:39:37 AM AEST
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| and I thought it was going to be funny... well, at least it had a rhyming scheme. Not too bad. |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:41:44 PM AEST
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| I love it....I've thought of writinf a poem about alcohol/love for a while....maybe this could be my influence.....reminds me of what "The Alkaline Trio" used to write about |
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Re: liquor induced happiness
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by brew on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:22:12 PM AEST
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seems we all have from time to time , used this way of coping. yet........in the long run, it sucks.! Powerful write.!
Brew~ |
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