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All that's left is love
Contributed by
Archie
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:13:17 PM in AEST
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The heart contracts inside the chest
thoughts evolve of great unrest
when things implode from more to less
All that's left is love
Friends depart when troubles rise
Alone men hide there tears inside
forlorn hearts hidden inpride
All that's left is love
Strip away the wall that's built
minus all the hurt and guilt
mend the broken heart like quilt
All that's left is love
Shed blood in war torn streets
Kill and tear devour and eat
Stomp and cry and grit your teeth
All that's left is love
Ponder questions in your head
Ponder life when lying in bed
Think about all that is ahead
All that's left is love
When all else fails and dreams decay
When fossils we are in the grave
and generations pass away
All that's left is love
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-02 13:13:17]
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Re: All that's left is love
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:20:17 PM AEST
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an amazing write Archie, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: All that's left is love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:29:45 PM AEST
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| You're right; this is very true. The rhyme is good and it's easy to follow your train of thought. Thanks. |
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Re: All that's left is love
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by Dorian on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:00:32 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of writting archie . . . Dorian
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Re: All that's left is love
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:20:52 PM AEST
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This is awesome, man.
Terrifcly lyric.
I could hear this as a song.
I love the words and what you're saying.
--Mothy |
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Re: All that's left is love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:33:48 PM AEST
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So true.
this reminds me of my mom's favorite saying when she was alive, "Only one life sonn will pass only what's done for Christ will last."
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: All that's left is love
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by thewordzwithin on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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| What can I say that you haven't already heard before? You have a great talent man, and the fact that it is so rare for men like us to share our emotions on paper is what makes this a great form of expression. I know how you feel and I also know that love can bring about the greatest things in life and it can also bring about the greatest pain. The price you pay for something so grand. Keep writing man. Expresion sometimes is the only thing we have and when everything else is gone, it's the only thing we can turn to. |
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