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RRRRR.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:12:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Am tired of working day and night
yet one as too alright.
am tired of moveing up and down
yes thats ture i have found.
am tired of buying the things thats new.
am tired of depending on no one but you.
am tired of lieing
am telling the truth.
am tired of being use by you.
am just tired of waiting,
am going through
am tired of saying i hate you.
i'm just simple tired of not giving myself to you.
AM JUST SIMPLE TIRED THATS TRUE.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-10-02 11:12:11]
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Re: RRRRR.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:13:10 PM AEST
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Just plain old sick and tired of being sick and tired.....I can relate..lol
well done
Barkeep!
Larry |
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Re: RRRRR.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:14:38 PM AEST
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ohhhh, good venting, i hope you are feeling happier soon, richard, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: RRRRR.
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by Archie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 01:18:19 PM AEST
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| You have a few errors in this poem, aside from that it is a decent write. |
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