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what it takes, (2 versions to this poem)
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Version I (short)
if i were to die tomorrow
would you care
at my funeral, would you be there?
would it take death for you to see
how ungrateful you are
what does it take?
friends
the good ones dont come easy
some people cherish and respect
but others dishonor and neglect
some people realize they're mistakes
but for others, death is what it takes
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Version II (Long)
If i were to die tomorrow
would you even care
at my funeral, would you be there?
would you cry, would u regret
or try despertly to forget?
throw out the movies we saw together?
during sunny or sh***y weather
act like nothing happened
not remember one good time we had
or how fast we got over the bad
did i make an impact on your life?
or was i just another face
a shadow on the wall
someone you couldnt talk to
when you would stumble or fall
did i ever make you smile
or was i just a pain
that you couldnt avoid every once and a while
why wasnt i worth keeping around
was it my reputation or my occupation
someone not worth the time of a relation
was i someone you could always tell the truth, and know i would understand
if i ***** up, would you be able to forgive me?
friends.....
the good ones are hard to find
some people cherish and respect
but others dishonor and neglect
ft
I wish i knew why your not here now
i wish i knew why Im not by your side
i wish i knew what it took, to turn your head
to make you listen to every word that i said
but sometimes theres nothin you can do
and the person has to realize their mistakes
and unfortunately, sometimes, death is what it takes
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wil_ca
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2002-11-12 20:00:00]
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Re: what it takes, (2 versions to this poem)
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:55:31 AM AEST
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I've asked myself these same
questions numberous times, this
poem took me back in time a bit
to one of the best times in my life
but also the darkest, Thank you
for sharing this, i enjoyed reading
it, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: what it takes, (2 versions to this poem)
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by lost_word on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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this was a great write version 1 and 2, i liked 2 better because it was extended and gave me more.
i read your poem an took the time out to make this comment, so plz make a comment on every poem u read, it doesnt take that long and it means a great deal to the writer. plz pass this on. drop a line on something i wrote if u have the time..
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Re: what it takes, (2 versions to this poem)
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 8th April 2007 @ 12:31:32 PM AEST
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| to put it simply, this really made me cry because i've had these questions asked to me and i felt like a piece of ***** for making him feel the way you feel. |
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