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Controlled by the devil
Contributed by
BuTTerFly_LoVe
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 09:28:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Controlled by the eyes of the devil
Information was bought to my attention
False advice was contribute to me
Became someone else, hated everything around me
Love doesn’t exist in my world.
The story of my life, consist with the devil.
He captured my heart with the words my ear wanted to hear.
Told me things no one has ever said.
Protected me from enemies that never cared
Never did he take advantage of me, had me in sky 9
All too good to be true, he fooled me, never did he care
Took my spirit away, and left me heart broken.
He never really cared, only wanted what made him exultant.
Why was I so sightless to see? What you really were.
Now I am dead to the world I don’t exist thanks to you.
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2004-10-02 09:28:41]
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Re: Controlled by the devil
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by Yousef on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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| Good effort, and deserves to be read, may be not very well written but it's a good poem as a whole, I liked the finale "Now I am dead to the world I don’t exist thanks to you", Good luck. |
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Re: Controlled by the devil
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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somewhat of how i view things...great job man...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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