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DESPISE
Contributed by
ila
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Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 04:22:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Forgotten feeling trapt in me,
seems never felt before.
For this heart of pain and sorrow
will never change, never let it go.
In this life it leads my way,
shows the path to burried soul.
It's here to find the words unspoken
and kill the mind that has awoken.
Before you it offers me protection,
creates hate against the dream.
Hides its will to burn me down,
lies to the fear that rests within.
I smile when it's gone
and cry for its promise to stay.
Yet I crave for vengeance,
want love to be my prey.
If I listen and follow
it will make me regret.
But I must obey
to pay the one and only debt.
The debt from the past,
the present and future.
Same mistake I've been doing
since the day it first came to torture.
It's amazing how it turns,
every day a new direction.
How much more will it take
to finally do it, succeed?
Doesn't matter what I say,
I'm going down without its care.
No matter what I do,
no matter how much I can bare.
Copyright ©
ila
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2004-10-02 04:22:55]
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Re: DESPISE
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by unforgiven on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:19:54 AM AEST
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i really love this poem and the amount of emotion that is conveyed through it. i feel like when i read it, i can feel everything u were going through at the time. some poets find that hard to do but u have done it in a great poem.
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Re: DESPISE
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by Hoots on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:54:17 AM AEST
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Very good poem....I was overwhelmed with emotion.
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