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A Naughty School Girl Final
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Being A Naughty School Girl
is only the feeling she has
She is really a full grown woman
living a life in the past
She feels that way only
from what her lover writes
Helping her to cope
with all her lonesome days and nights
Aside from all of this
when they are each together
How they feel is something else
it couldn't, possibly be any better
So this naughty full grown woman
A Naughty School Girl in her mind
Has had four lovely days and nights
to totally unwind
They are so happy together
no matter what they do
They tell each other constantly
my darling I love you
So this story comes to an end
until the next time they will meet
In the mean time both of them
must continue to be discreet
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2004-10-01 22:17:12]
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Re: A Naughty School Girl Final
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:54:54 PM AEST
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| Humorous. It has good rhthym and a good story. |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl Final
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:14:22 AM AEST
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a very good ending to your story Bruce :) a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: A Naughty School Girl Final
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 10:05:01 PM AEST
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NIce twist... this was nice but I preferred the other series.....
Jenni |
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