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Note to Self
Contributed by
andthefoolshallburn
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Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:31:58 PM in AEST
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You've beaten me before, but this time you won't hold me back. No, this time I won't stop for my last breath. You won't be able to tell me I can't and never will, because from now on, I will.
I can't taste the tears anymore because they won't move another inch, not until you're broken by so much more. And I can finally overcome.
From your hands, deliveries of pain will cease to find refuge inside of me. You've beaten me before but this time you won't hold me back. No, this time I won't stop for my last breath. I'll press onward.
I'LL PRESS ONWARD.
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Re: Note to Self
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by xsadxeyesxtendxtoxliex on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:40:24 PM AEST
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hey.. i write songs like constantly and i just wanted to tell you that yours is liek a bazillion times better.. keep with it.. and i hope everything has worked otu and ur bad tiems are behind u ..
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Re: Note to Self
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:00:35 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Note to Self
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by SilentSuffering on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:57:46 AM AEST
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Aw... wow I really like that. Very sad and I hope you're getting on alright now. :) I need songs similar to this as well, and they really do help most of the time when it gets really bad.
I write songs as well actually, and I really wish I could hear the music that goes with it, it sounds like a great song.
Thanks for sharing!
Take care, hang in there and God bless!
~SilentSuffering~ |
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